วันอาทิตย์ที่ 16 กุมภาพันธ์ พ.ศ. 2557

My Valentine's Day

 

      What do you think about how is the Valentine’s Day important? For me, this day is the time that I can say everything which I want to my important people and do the special things with them too.
       On February 14 is Valentine’s Day. I had the best memory on this day because I did many activities and did many things with my important people who are called “friends”. In the morning, I went to Phra Pathom Chedi by bus with my friends for making merit and walking around the temple. After I made merit, I walked into the market for eating foods with them. I chose to eat an ice-cream because I was the vegetarian,so I couldn’t eat the meat. Then,I went to Sanam Chandra Palace for seeing the beautiful building but it closed.I was so sad because I had never gone there before.I took lots of photos around there instead.
       Even I don’t have any boyfriend but I can stay alone because I have many people who love me. I promise that I will not forget the best time certainly.


6 ความคิดเห็น:

  1. I think that your blog is very clear and thank you for share your Valentine's Day.

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  2. In my opinion, I think that you write it well and clearly but color of letters aren't clearly.

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  3. I think that you write easy to understand but you should change color of word

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  4. I think you're actually doing really well. Good job splitting the dialogue into separate paragraphs, except for near the end. Remember that each new dialogue gets its own paragraph.

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  5. ความคิดเห็นนี้ถูกผู้เขียนลบ

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  6. Your Valentine's Day is wonderful. Your friends may love you so much and you love them too.
    Some error
    - making merit
    Should be "making a merit"

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