On the end of the 2013 year,it was the time that you should release the bad things away from your life and begin to do the good things on the New Year 2014.
For me,I did many activities with my lovely family on the end of 2013 year.In the morning,I helped my mom for preparing breakfast.They were delicious so much because as anyone in my family could see,she was the best cooker.After I had already eaten breakfast ,I dressed up for going to the grandmother' house in Ratchaburi province.When I arrived to grandmother' house,my older sister and I cooked the foods for dinner together.I was impressed so much because I hardly ever do anything with her so,that time was the good time for me.And the important thing that I had never forgot them was chanting across the year with my parents too.
On the New Year 2014,I also did some activities with my family.In the morning,I went to Wat Pra Sart Sit for making merit with my family, having lunch together, and buying some gift for me.I promissed with my mother that I will be a good daughter of her and make her proud of me.
Even it was the short time but I won't forget it certainly,I promissed.
You write it well. But there are mistake a little bit. The sentence "because I hardly ever do anything with her so,that time was the good time for me" You should write "because I hardly ever do anything with her, so that time was the good time for me." Right?
ตอบลบSopa your blog is very good and there are mistake about comma because the comma is in front of so.
ตอบลบI like your style of writing but I think your describing things a bit too much.
ตอบลบI like your writing style, it is very descriptive and clear!
I think that your blog is good but you should punctuation mark
ตอบลบMy friend, Your always wrote it well.You try to check a comma in the sentence "anything with her so,that time was the good time for me." It should put a comma in front of the word "so"
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